祖國啊我親愛的祖國


舒婷



我是你河邊上破舊的老水車
數百年來紡著疲憊的歌
我是你額上熏黑的礦燈
照你在歷史的隧洞里蝸行摸索
我是干癟的稻穗;是失修的路基
是淤灘上的駁船
把纖繩深深
勒進你的肩膊
—— 祖國啊!

我是貧困
我是悲哀
我是你祖祖輩輩
痛苦的希望啊
是“飛天”袖間
千百年來未落到地面的花朵
—— 祖國啊

我是你簇新的理想
剛從神話的蛛網里掙脫
我是你雪被下古蓮的胚芽
我是你掛著眼淚的笑窩
我是新刷出的雪白的起跑線
是緋紅的黎明
正在噴薄
—— 祖國啊

我是你十億分之一
是你九百六十萬平方的總和
你以傷痕累累的乳房
喂養了
迷惘的我,深思的我,沸騰的我
那就從我的血肉之軀上
去取得
你的富饒,你的榮光,你的自由
—— 祖國啊
我親愛的祖國

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  •   鄭志雄 124.236.112.181     2016/2/9 8:59:10     415 樓

  • 情感真摯,祖國呀 我親愛的祖國 這是那個時代最炙熱的情感
  •   毛大同 101.71.160.110     2014/11/23 13:39:04     414 樓

  • —— 祖國啊!

    我是貧困
    我是悲哀
    我是你祖祖輩輩
    痛苦的希望啊
    是“飛天”袖間
    千百年來未落到地面的花朵
    (主啊------)原來現代詩與圣經相差無幾。呵呵。
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  • 寫的不錯嘛挺又才的
  •   126在線閱讀網 119.248.94.232     2009/10/8 14:26:06     357 樓

  • wqysgdwygjhegfgefyerfgerfgdgcuyqyjwqdcjhjkviureyiuhsd;kc;KSDIOQEWFIUYEFUJGSADCUGEUYGCUYSGCUYQWEUYFYETFYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDFFFFFFFFFGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHY7DUTTTTTIEUFU7YERIFYPPPPPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAABBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
  •   126在線閱讀網 119.248.94.232     2009/10/8 14:19:31     356 樓

  • 挺棒的
  •   126在線閱讀網 117.81.49.130     2009/10/6 20:43:53     355 樓

  • 看到這里,我就有些觸景生情,當閱兵走過天安門的那一刻我不免有一些激動,作為一個中國人的驕傲真的那種心情真的不能表達,就算一個最壞的人當他看到自己的祖國有一些成就是他的能心是能被感染的
  •   126在線閱讀網 61.170.243.11     2009/10/5 17:50:26     354 樓

  • 此詩借鑒了前蘇聯詩人沃茲涅先斯基《戈雅》中的圓周句式“我是戈雅,……我是……”,但又有創造性的發展。圓周句式大多出現在抒發強烈情緒的作品中,悲傷痛苦的情調最宜用它來渲染。舒婷寫的是“我”與祖國的關系,用這種句式,增加了痛苦和摯愛的深度。第一節是對祖國歷史的反思,精心選取五組意象,象征祖國千百年來落后、貧窮、災難深重的面貌:前四行平穩深長,富有音響和色彩,給人以深思沉重之感;五、六行則短促,不事描繪;后三行又伸長,行短意緊,顯示出情感的起伏,出現主詞。第二節承上啟下,揭示出蘊藏在中華民族靈魂中的希望之花從未消亡過,災難雖重,理想永存,只是暫未實現。此節先短句后長句,然后主詞復現,似意猶未盡,一種深深的遺憾之情便瀉于筆端。第三節傾吐希望,激情昂揚,連用五組意象描繪出處于歷史轉折期的祖國百廢待舉的面貌。每一個意象有自己獨特的意義,五組連用形成博喻排比,強化了亢奮熱烈的情緒,表達出詩人歡欣鼓舞的情懷。第四節頭兩行用“十億分之一”與“九百六十萬平方”構成小與大的對比,寓意“我”是祖國的一分子,但“我”的胸中又包容著整個祖國。接著以乳房養“我”與從“我的血肉之軀上去取得”又成一對照,突出“我”同祖國的血乳關系;甚至迷惘、深思、沸騰,與富饒、榮光、自由,也是性質相反的對襯,以見出痛苦和歡欣的無限。如果前三節是寫“我”與祖國的關系,第四節則是反過來寫祖國和“我”的關系。句法參差正是心情激動至極的表現,在對主詞的雙重呼喚中結束全篇,達到最高潮。

    全詩無一字議論,皆以意象描繪,以情貫穿。所選意象既質樸又鮮明,既獨特又貼切,每一個詞也都與被描繪的景象緊密契合。抒情又非一覽無余的傾瀉,而很注意其波動的節奏,由悲哀、低沉到欣喜、高昂,又由亢奮到深沉,其中糾結著悲愴、憂患、熾烈,失望與希望,嘆息與追求等多種復雜而凝重的感情,體現出詩人獨有的委婉幽深、柔美雋永的抒情個性
  •   126在線閱讀網 61.170.243.11     2009/10/5 17:47:22     353 樓

  • llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
  •   126在線閱讀網 61.170.243.11     2009/10/5 17:44:03     352 樓

  • jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjpppppppppppppppppppppppppsssspsppspspspppspspspspspspspsppssppspspspspspspsppppppppppppppppppppspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspssppsddddddddddddddddddddddddddkldlskd;aslkdsadklsflsjfsdfhdkshfskfhwelfhewufhlksdhwfhskdhskfhksjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjjjjjjjjjddlwljjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjpppppppppppppppppppppppppsssspsppspspspppspspspspspspspsppssppspspspspspspsppppppppppppppppppppspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspssppsddddddddddddddddddddddddddkldlskd;aslkdsadklsflsjfsdfhdkshfskfhwelfhewufhlksdhwfhskdhskfhksjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjjjjjjjjjddlwljjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjpppppppppppppppppppppppppsssspsppspspspppspspspspspspspsppssppspspspspspspsppppppppppppppppppppspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspspssppsddddddddddddddddddddddddddkldlskd;
  •   126在線閱讀網 113.96.141.157     2009/10/4 10:16:12     351 樓

  •   126在線閱讀網 220.176.162.86     2009/10/1 14:40:24     350 樓

  • 好棒
  •   126在線閱讀網 122.233.55.194     2009/9/30 20:54:08     349 樓

  • mvx fdfi Di
  •   126在線閱讀網 122.233.55.194     2009/9/30 20:53:51     348 樓

  • hchchcgh uxg h;
  •   126在線閱讀網 122.233.55.194     2009/9/30 20:53:43     347 樓

  •   126在線閱讀網 124.226.111.139     2009/9/30 20:05:05     346 樓

  •   126在線閱讀網 219.149.190.78     2009/9/30 19:15:29     345 樓

  •   126在線閱讀網 61.154.218.75     2009/9/30 18:56:20     344 樓

  • 87樓是誰,寫這么多。
  •   126在線閱讀網 61.154.218.75     2009/9/30 18:37:45     343 樓

  • 寫得好感人啊。好,很好。
  •   126在線閱讀網 61.178.181.84     2009/9/30 13:26:12     342 樓

  • 寫的很好啊,我很喜歡
  •   126在線閱讀網 117.136.27.250     2009/9/29 21:46:01     341 樓

  •   126在線閱讀網 117.136.27.250     2009/9/29 21:45:02     340 樓

  •   126在線閱讀網 221.204.73.60     2009/9/29 21:16:52     339 樓

  • 哈哈好棒啊[M41
  •   126在線閱讀網 60.189.43.114     2009/9/29 20:26:13     338 樓

  • 太好了
  •   126在線閱讀網 117.22.32.253     2009/9/29 20:00:05     337 樓

  • 寫的未免太好了
  •   126在線閱讀網 118.116.139.249     2009/9/29 17:52:20     336 樓

  •   yyyyy 118.116.139.249     2009/9/29 17:46:54     335 樓

  • jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
  •   yyyyy 118.116.139.249     2009/9/29 17:45:58     334 樓

  •   126在線閱讀網 220.173.225.194     2009/9/29 8:17:13     333 樓

  •   126在線閱讀網 220.173.225.194     2009/9/29 8:16:24     332 樓

  •   126在線閱讀網 222.208.149.121     2009/9/28 21:52:36     331 樓

  • 不錯
  •   126在線閱讀網 113.194.133.1     2009/9/28 20:11:34     330 樓

  •   126在線閱讀網 115.59.230.144     2009/9/28 19:22:50     329 樓

  • 寫的很好gOOd
  •   126在線閱讀網 121.22.232.197     2009/9/28 18:28:46     328 樓

  •   126在線閱讀網 60.176.34.140     2009/9/28 11:07:36     327 樓

  • 此詩借鑒了前蘇聯詩人沃茲涅先斯基《戈雅》中的圓周句式“我是戈雅,……我是……”,但又有創造性的發展。圓周句式大多出現在抒發強烈情緒的作品中,悲傷痛苦的情調最宜用它來渲染。舒婷寫的是“我”與祖國的關系,用這種句式,增加了痛苦和摯愛的深度。第一節是對祖國歷史的反思,精心選取五組意象,象征祖國千百年來落后、貧窮、災難深重的面貌:前四行平穩深長,富有音響和色彩,給人以深思沉重之感;五、六行則短促,不事描繪;后三行又伸長,行短意緊,顯示出情感的起伏,出現主詞。第二節承上啟下,揭示出蘊藏在中華民族靈魂中的希望之花從未消亡過,災難雖重,理想永存,只是暫未實現。此節先短句后長句,然后主詞復現,似意猶未盡,一種深深的遺憾之情便瀉于筆端。第三節傾吐希望,激情昂揚,連用五組意象描繪出處于歷史轉折期的祖國百廢待舉的面貌。每一個意象有自己獨特的意義,五組連用形成博喻排比,強化了亢奮熱烈的情緒,表達出詩人歡欣鼓舞的情懷。第四節頭兩行用“十億分之一”與“九百六十萬平方”構成小與大的對比,寓意“我”是祖國的一分子,但“我”的胸中又包容著整個祖國。接著以乳房養“我”與從“我的血肉之軀上去取得”又成一對照,突出“我”同祖國的血乳關系;甚至迷惘、深思、沸騰,與富饒、榮光、自由,也是性質相反的對襯,以見出痛苦和歡欣的無限。如果前三節是寫“我”與祖國的關系,第四節則是反過來寫祖國和“我”的關系。句法參差正是心情激動至極的表現,在對主詞的雙重呼喚中結束全篇,達到最高潮。

    全詩無一字議論,皆以意象描繪,以情貫穿。所選意象既質樸又鮮明,既獨特又貼切,每一個詞也都與被描繪的景象緊密契合。抒情又非一覽無余的傾瀉,而很注意其波動的節奏,由悲哀、低沉到欣喜、高昂,又由亢奮到深沉,其中糾結著悲愴、憂患、熾烈,失望與希望,嘆息與追求等多種復雜而凝重的感情,體現出詩人獨有的委婉幽深、柔美雋永的抒情個性
  •   126在線閱讀網 117.90.216.84     2009/9/28 6:05:00     326 樓

  • dsf
  •   126在線閱讀網 114.112.152.123     2009/9/27 20:14:45     325 樓

  • 還好
  •    122.225.55.49     2009/9/27 19:17:05     324 樓

  • http://www.corvzm.tw/XianDaiAB5BF7CE-B16A-405D-BC12-D1AA64FEEF13.html
  •   淘氣小何何 122.225.55.49     2009/9/27 19:12:58     323 樓

  • 太差啦這叫誰來看啦
  •   126在線閱讀網 222.53.224.189     2009/9/27 18:48:14     322 樓

  •   126在線閱讀網 123.53.8.44     2009/9/27 18:37:28     321 樓

  • hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
  •   126在線閱讀網 119.123.120.78     2009/9/27 17:56:26     320 樓

  •   126在線閱讀網 119.123.120.78     2009/9/27 17:56:14     319 樓

  •   126在線閱讀網 119.123.120.78     2009/9/27 17:56:06     318 樓

  •   126在線閱讀網 58.251.185.51     2009/9/27 12:42:17     317 樓

  •   126在線閱讀網 58.251.185.51     2009/9/27 12:41:39     316 樓

  • 很好
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